Analysis of Hermit to emperor



If you lay down your head to rest,
do you feel my heartbeat
as the way to dream?

With your head on my chest,
I no longer feel hemmed in
by my own inner void,
that never fills the same space.

For me too, in that moment,
the road to sleep is open,
to a world incorporeal;

a world living
in images,
breathing colours
hardly in existence.

By your hands, when they lead me
down that road, the waking greys are lifted
and I am freed from being unheard, unread,
a mere stepping stone to elsewhere.

But if I utter not, act not,
why then should I be heard?
I cloister myself,
until I come to your hands again,
once more find the nest to rest.

I can only be Emperor
if you are yourself unvaulted
and in all times
can dream on my chest.


Scheme AXX AXXB XXX XXBX XXXX XXXXA XAXA
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 11111 10111 111111 1110110 111101 1101011 1110110 0111110 1011 0110 0100 101 100010 1111111 1110101110 01111100101 0110111 11110111 111111 1101 011111101 1110111 11101100 111011 0011 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 700
Words 145
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3, 4, 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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A poem about people (me and my wife) helping each opther along finding a way out of trauma together

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Submitted by JohnLoopstra on September 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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