Analysis of open mirrors



looking back on how things
use to be we  ones young and wide
and free
with nothing to say
as we  turn and walk away

with open mirrors of yesterday
playing back in my mind
 all the reflections you
left behind

now the mirror is cold and dark
has I pick up the pieces of this shatter
heart

open mirrors to another world
I m so lost  in darkness with out you girl
two broken soul are  forever gone
the pain of our life most go on

now I m crying frozen tears from my eyes
knowing  with out  you I m going to die
for all the open mirrors of yesterday were
all a lie

open mirrors to another world
I m so lost  in darkness with out  girl
two broken soul are  forever gone
the pain of our life most go on

so many times  I see the
reflections on how thing  
could been
as we reach deeper in

open mirrors to another world
I m so lost  in darkness with out  girl
two broken soul are  forever gone
the pain of our life most go on


Scheme xxxaa abxb xcx DeFG xhch DEFG xxii DEFG
Poetic Form
Metre 101111 11111101 01 11011 1110101 11010110 101011 100101 101 10101101 11110101110 1 101010101 11110101111 110110101 011101111 11110101111 10111111011 11010101100 101 101010101 1111010111 110110101 011101111 1101110 010111 11 111100 101010101 1111010111 110110101 011101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 908
Words 189
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 25

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Submitted by mysticstarpublishing on September 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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jody l cooke

i was born in 1969 in north Carolina i m a writer poet artist and author i got my first book of poems out on the web called beneath the sands of time. i love poetry it is a great art for the soul. more…

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