Analysis of Reminesense



Aftr the heavy August tempests,
 September sun peeps thru' the sleepy skies.....all drained out!
And suddenly there,s romance in the air....
The breeze more softer, the sun,s warmth more lighter like d soft caress of your warm hands..,rather than d scorching days!
And time will fly to wane off another year.
Another bundle of memories tucked in our hearts.
Of d good times,of laughter of tears of pain....
Life how you go on till we finally close.....
Close all the chapters of our lives!
And rest at last till we go back to the Maker.
I sit under these loving trees who saw me grow....
In my mother,s little orchard....
How each baby sapling blossomed into majestic trees towering d night skies...
And as each season came they blossomed and gave their fruits...
Duties of their own....
But now alas! Woe to me and them....
They will all b felled!!
As time has changed the very face of our Home!
How will I bear to see you gone
when you have witnessed so much of me!!!
I played under your glade in summer n in winter's breeze
Hoped  fairies sitting around.....
Why?o why my Creator do I have to witness this agony !!
But time and only time can tell......


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,134
Words 216
Sentences 25
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 866
Words per stanza (avg) 211

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Nature...n life

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Submitted by Monalisaliz on September 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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