Analysis of BUS RIDES AND MELANCHOLY



IDES AND MELANCHOLY
I’ve developed a love/hate relationship with buses
Yes, that contraption carrying people in masses
At one hand, it gets me to places I need to be
On the other, it takes me back to “you and me”

A typical trip for me, takes an hour or two
Just enough time for thoughts about me and you
Sometimes I wish the wheels would go faster
So I could force myself to stop the ponder

But just like what happened back then
I took this bus and let go of the helm
I have given fate the power to steer
When I should’ve took over when we started to veer

Now I am trapped in this wayward motion
While you are traveling in the opposite direction
I know I have realized it too late
But never again will I leave my destination to fate


Scheme AXXAA BBCC XXDD EEFF
Poetic Form
Metre 10100 1010011010110 1101010010010 1111111101111 101011111101 0100111111011 10111101101 0111011110 1111111010 11111011 1111011101 1110101011 111110111011 1111011010 11110000100010 111110111 11001111101011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 724
Words 145
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 145
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

The poem is about a man's struggle moving on from a past relationship.

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Submitted by JayTaw15 on September 17, 2021

Modified on April 08, 2023

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