Analysis of Red Tears

Abhishek Kumar Chaudhary 1995 (Kathmandu)



The way she describes the world is so magical,
Trapped inside the spider’s fang, world sweet mine, don’t let me die,
World sweet mine, cries with the red tears dropping from the sky,
Hope is the word, for hope I want to try, dancing through the stars with hope don’t let me die,
Something so exciting, something full of life, destroyed by the rustic flow of time,
Damaged by the caustic remarks of swift waterfall running through the pine,
Reflection of bright rainbows through the light, hampered by the dark clouds, by the sight,
Gods be amazed, enthralled and kept aside, the flow so pristine and pure, darkened by the light.


Scheme ABBBCDEE
Poetic Form
Metre 011010111100 10101011111111 1111101110101 110111111110101111111 10101010111011010111 10101001111010101 010111101101011101 1101010101011100110101
Characters 627
Words 111
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 62
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 495
Words per stanza (avg) 111

About this poem

This poem is about two entangled heart, who loves each other but don't have a way to communicate to each other, about their love.

Font size:
 

Submitted by cabhishek690 on September 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

33 sec read
7

Abhishek Kumar Chaudhary

He is a person, whose path is still not clear. more…

All Abhishek Kumar Chaudhary poems | Abhishek Kumar Chaudhary Books

1 fan

Discuss this Abhishek Kumar Chaudhary poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Red Tears" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 12 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/110381/red-tears>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    18
    days
    20
    hours
    4
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    The way the lines look on the page is known as ________.
    A Line
    B Stanza
    C Form
    D Paragraph