Analysis of Present



The day that we met,
And each other we knew.
By each passing day,
I bloom feelings for you.

The sun the moon the stars,
Are all so overrated.
Just the glimpse of you,
And entire galaxy is faded.

I prayed the deity,
For the girl so simple.
He blessed me the present,
A smile with dimple.

I want to flaunt this present,
To the world and show off.
But I fear for the lifetime,
I want to be yours.

I can't afford to loose you,
For if i loose this thing.
The key to the happiness,
I ll miss it by an inch.

I promise to walk you,
Through hell and heaven.
We'll climb the bridge together,
Of colors full of seven


Scheme XAXA XXAX XBCB CXXX AXXX ADXD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 01111 011011 11101 111011 010101 111010 10111 0010100110 110100 101110 111010 01110 1111110 101011 111101 11111 1101111 111111 0110100 1111111 110111 11010 1101010 1101110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 582
Words 123
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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The beauty of the girl I once loved

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Written on September 29, 2021

Submitted by akashbabaria96 on September 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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