Analysis of Present
The day that we met,
And each other we knew.
By each passing day,
I bloom feelings for you.
The sun the moon the stars,
Are all so overrated.
Just the glimpse of you,
And entire galaxy is faded.
I prayed the deity,
For the girl so simple.
He blessed me the present,
A smile with dimple.
I want to flaunt this present,
To the world and show off.
But I fear for the lifetime,
I want to be yours.
I can't afford to loose you,
For if i loose this thing.
The key to the happiness,
I ll miss it by an inch.
I promise to walk you,
Through hell and heaven.
We'll climb the bridge together,
Of colors full of seven
Scheme | XAXA XXAX XBCB CXXX AXXX ADXD |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (50%) |
Metre | 01111 011011 11101 111011 010101 111010 10111 0010100110 110100 101110 111010 01110 1111110 101011 111101 11111 1101111 111111 0110100 1111111 110111 11010 1101010 1101110 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 582 |
Words | 123 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 76 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 21 |
About this poem
The beauty of the girl I once loved
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Written on September 29, 2021
Submitted by akashbabaria96 on September 27, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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