Analysis of .i'm fine.
How many years must i lie until i believe it? Every time i speak, my voice feels foreign. my chords tremble and a sound is mustered, but never my own. my lips shape and form, but the words are unrecognizable. To be honest, i never realize i’ve spoken until it’s over. Until my brain finally catches up and realizes that it was never my intention. They were never my words.
How many days must i live until I Am? my hands move, fingers twitch, legs rise, feet land. But i am never sure if they are my own. my own intentions, my own actions, my own desires. i am never sure. Every action unnoticed until complete. Every thought lagging behind, until it’s too late. i am never sure.
In the grand scheme of things, i have been here but for a fleeting moment. A blink, a blip within the eyes of Yhe Universe. But do we not all have our own? Our own infinates our own timelines our own forever? i have existed forever. There is no before...i was here then. But the funny thing is, is that i will not be there after. i will not be there once my forever has ended.
And so i ask myself: What’s The Point? my forever will not last forever and there will be a time when my ending comes. When your ending comes. When ending comes. It's a scary feeling knowing there’s absolutely nothing to be done. i was here and then i will not. So what? Does everything have meaning, is it sacred, is it meant to be held and cherished?
Or are We All going to fucking die?
Scheme | XXXX X |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 110111101101110011111110111000111011011111011011001001110110101100111001111001010100111101010101011 110111101111111011111111101111111101011101101011101100100100101100110010111111101 001111111111010100101010111101111111011011101101010101101001011111111010111111111101111111010110 011110011010111010011101111011110111011010101010101011111101111111101101110111111010 1111101101 |
Characters | 1,475 |
Words | 280 |
Sentences | 33 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 5 |
Letters per line (avg) | 222 |
Words per line (avg) | 56 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 555 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 140 |
About this poem
A prose piece about the uncertainties in life.
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Written on October 04, 2021
Submitted on October 04, 2021
Modified on March 27, 2023
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