Analysis of Terrain

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



Without you knowing I trod upon your stars,
I felt my feet bleed on glass, sulphur and tar,
I shared, my cuts like leopard cubs rolls
Drinking no fount of lovers afar
I questioned the query and all but toils
My spots not infected just somewhat boiled
I craved the sacred life and more;
my body weak - your final claw.
Then sat abranched stretched hose
I gave in to my purpose.


Scheme ABCBDEFGHI
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 01110110111 11111111001 111111011 101111001 1100100111 1110101111 11010101 11011101 11111 1101110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 367
Words 72
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 297
Words per stanza (avg) 72

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Written on October 09, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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