Analysis of Sin on my Heart.
I didn't have the right to love you,
What you said was true
My body was weaker and passionless
But my mind was not untrue
Deep down routine was all I had
That wasn't good enough for you
My clothes were dated and bleak
Not nearly as vibrant as you
New love was always rationless
Especially for you
I didn't have the right to hate you
Though I knew not what to do
I didn't have the right to love you
Though you left me feeling blue.
I didn't have the right to forget you
But forgive is what I'd do.
| Scheme | AabacadabaaaAaaa |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 110101111 11111 11011001 1111101 11011111 11010111 1101001 11011011 11111 01011 110101111 1111111 110101111 1111101 1101011011 1011111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 481 |
| Words | 101 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 16 |
| Lines Amount | 16 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 387 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 101 |
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Sin of loving you.
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Written on October 11, 2021
Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 11, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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