Analysis of Surrendered
A surrendered heart
A heart. That wants a better ending
It wants a better life than it has now
It wants to change for the better
It wants to be more obedient
To what is right
It says I am tired of what's not good
It says change me dear Lord
It says I want a better life now
It says keep me oh God
It says I surrender
It says I need help
I can't. do this by myself.
I surrender
I surrender
It says life has to get better..
| Scheme | abcdefghcidjkDDd |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 00101 011101010 1101011111 11111010 111110100 1111 1111101111 111111 111101011 111111 111010 11111 111111 1010 1010 11111110 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 408 |
| Words | 91 |
| Sentences | 4 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 16 |
| Lines Amount | 16 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 324 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 91 |
About this poem
Giving up things to make your life better
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Written on October 18, 2021
Submitted by doreenefelder191 on October 18, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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