Analysis of WITHOUT YOU



Without you, life would a challenge, a messed up world and only a messed up me without courage.
Without you is me living a life that’s out of range  
Without you, would be me living a life full of questions that only drives me to the next question
At point blank, broken to pieces, a broken heart  that only misses
Without you is me refusing to see the truth because the heart refuses to see what the eyes can’t see
Without you is a scenario love scene, a scene were Love is lost to time and regrets,
Without U is unsolved equation, an incomplete formation Cuz you forever be my perfection
Without U they can never be an I Cuz U and I together will always be perfect
So without U, how can I love when it’s only U that I love, I mean only u and I are perfect
And when perfect is the sound of “I loving U” and only U because only U is all need
Without U then they can never be a me Cuz U makes me who I am


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Poetic Form
Metre 01111010011101001110110 0111110011111 011111100111101101110110 11110110010111010 01111010110101010101110111 0111001001101011111001 01110101010010101101011010 0111110111110101011101 10111111111011111110101101 010110111101010101101111 011111101011111111
Characters 907
Words 185
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 64
Words per line (avg) 17
Letters per stanza (avg) 700
Words per stanza (avg) 186

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Love lost to time and Regrets

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Written on October 20, 2021

Submitted by Kuli on October 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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