Analysis of I can't feel the wind.



I can fly
but I can't feel the wind.
I can move the air
but I can't feel the wind.
I can see as through you
but I can't feel the wind.
I can touch your soul
but I can't feel the wind.
I can choose not to stay in
but I can't feel the wind.
I can face your fears
but I can't feel the wind.
I can tremble with love
but I can't feel the wind.
I can send you dreams
but I can't feel the wind.
I can bring you back
but I can't feel the wind.
I know you're there
but I can't feel the wind.
I can flash like lightening
but I can't feel the wind.
I know you love me
but I can't feel the wind.
I can be born
but all I'd feel is the wind.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111 111101 11101 111101 111111 111101 11111 111101 1111110 111101 11111 111101 111011 111101 11111 111101 11111 111101 1111 111101 1111100 111101 11111 111101 1111 1111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 604
Words 143
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 458
Words per stanza (avg) 143

About this poem

Flying without feeling. Breathing.

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Written on October 21, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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