Analysis of Naked in the flower fields.



Near the end of the world,
When all the life felt sacred;
When all the clothes were gone,
And every being sacred;
The people walked together
In fields of flowers, naked;
And all their spirits shon
A heaven they had maked;
Through waving arms and hands
Where breeze that loveth wished;
Deep within the Lords warmth
Everyone was remembered;
They heard their loved ones calls
That noone shall be missed;
For found was the pure family
Creator voice had callethed.
And gently did they sway
Opened feelings had graced.
No longer they felt cold
as the sun was brightened.


Scheme ABCBDBEAFGHIJKLAMNOP
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 101101 1101110 110101 01001010 0101010 0111010 011101 010111 110101 11111 101011 101010 111111 11111 11101100 010111 010111 101011 110111 101110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 545
Words 99
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 453
Words per stanza (avg) 99

About this poem

Embracing your body.

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Written on October 24, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 24, 2021

Modified on March 25, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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