Analysis of Heartstring

Jorrella Yuki 2000 (Malolos, Bulacan)



The first time I noticed you, you were in a band.
Your name may not be Alice, but you deserve a wonderland.
6 years ago we both joined the light, I existed in your stare.
Since then, I always wanted to see you win, I asked myself, why do I care?

Sol, don’t look back, you are amazing.
If you think you lack on something, dear, you are always inspiring.
You are only allowed to look back if you want to see me.
Because I'll be here, got your back since the beginning.

Go out and climb,
that’s where the fruit is.
If you stumble or fall,
We'll pick up the pieces.

So I will not do anything
I'll be waiting.
But If someone captures your heartstring,
I'll be happy for you, always, King.


Scheme AABB CCXC XXXX CCCC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 011110110001 11111101101010 101111011010011 11111011111111111 111111010 111111101111010 111001111111111 0111111110010 1101 11011 111011 111010 1111110 1110 1111011 11101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 675
Words 134
Sentences 12
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Written on October 28, 2021

Submitted by jorrella_r on October 28, 2021

Modified by jorrella_r on October 28, 2021

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