Analysis of Peter in the wind.
"Got to go out again Ma" said the young man, hugging his mother. He knew there'd never be one better but she was getting older.
"Where's my kiss dear" she grimaced.
He kissed her on the lips, sweet faced.
"The soaps are on soon m' love" she yelled. "Mama me" he said and "Tick tack, soon be back".
Peter made it to the park and dropped his trousers to his ankles in the dark. His rear felt the wind and sparkled as he finned.
Making love with vigor then came a fetal cigar' and a beer for his mother.
An angel appeared before them blinding and fast paced. Leading one away from their exciting embrace.
Then the angel turned back and on his lips gave the purest love smack'.
A garden of beautiful flowers appeared around them. " It's better than Big Ben" he gasped and then it left him scared, half bare.
" Mama me" he said and stunned walked home, droped his bag and stared at his drone. Forgetting to kiss his mother he'd found an equal lover.
"But what's wrong dear" she sighed in his ear as the sound died he shed a tear. "But mom, I saw an aaaangel" he said and "Theres nothing to fear" he felt as he handed her her beer.
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Metre | 11110111011101101111011101111010 1111110 11010111 01111111110111011111 101110101110111000111101010111 10111011010010011110 1100101110011101011101001 1010110111101011 010110010010111101111101111111 10111011111101111010111101111010 1111110111011110111111111011011111110001 |
Characters | 1,216 |
Words | 226 |
Sentences | 18 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 11 |
Lines Amount | 11 |
Letters per line (avg) | 85 |
Words per line (avg) | 20 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 936 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 218 |
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Homosexuality
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Written on October 28, 2021
Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 28, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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