Analysis of Cave to the final kingdom.



The tunnel of rocks lowered and thinned around me struggling and selfish crushed life calling from every side.
Cutting and scratching its diamonds pinching my fingers as I moved towards its crumbling exit of light.
My feet collapsing over again on its brilliant angulance and ambiance emmiting heavy blows to my ribcage as I swung across ledge after ledge of falling stars.
Until finally my hand emerged atop the cave opening to the new world, the final world, the final kingdom.
Whisper on whisper getting louder and more vivid announcing my arrival as I pulled my tired body out of the endless pit.


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Poetic Form
Metre 010111001011100010111011001 10010110101101110111001011 11010100111101010011011111110111011101 01100110101011001011010101010 1011010100110010101011111010110101
Characters 596
Words 103
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 98
Words per line (avg) 21
Letters per stanza (avg) 491
Words per stanza (avg) 103

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Seas of light.

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Written on October 29, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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