Analysis of Gifts left for the Living.



The lips closed on the angels feathers
Swimming through them the lion prayed.
"God" he said. "I have caught droplets of love, am I not an arch angel?".
" No" said God, "for you are not yet dead, therefore you should not have killed my angels". On the death day of the lion, the lion chased the angels souls, who would not be fooled a second time by the lions charge and so said, "though your fur is soft I would not groom it like you do", "therefore you do not need to be as soft as an angel", " you are still as mild as a kitten with it's mother" and "You have many more gifts left to receive, therefore you may live again". Then the angel led the lion back to its body.


Scheme ABCD
Poetic Form
Metre 011101010 10110101 11111110111111110 111111111111111110101110100101010111111010110101011111111111111111111111111101111110101110011101111011111011010101011110
Characters 748
Words 142
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 142
Words per line (avg) 34
Letters per stanza (avg) 568
Words per stanza (avg) 135

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Written on October 31, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 31, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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