Analysis of Some times
I think I feel him reaching out to me from some Astral plane
He hears me calling out his name.
Familiar are my lips my breath his skin.
I love him still
I loved him when and I will love him in the end.
His spirit crying out in pain
His heart in pieces once again
I close my eyes and call to him
thru the quiet of the night.
Come and be with me my love.
On the other side my spirit waits.
Souls united way back in time
Lost without,
weary bitter and betrayed.
As the days grow old and the last door slams
The lights go out
until there is naught
for the glow of a phone screen lighting up the night
This is where is starts
the writhing and the whining
of a broken heart thats been hiding
Alone on our beds
A goodnight kiss is more than missed
Living lives without passion
feels like slowly dying
Scheme | ABCDEAFGHIJKLMNLOHPQQRSTQ |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (24%) |
Metre | 111111011111101 11110111 0101111111 1111 111101111001 11010101 11010101 11110111 1010101 1011111 101011101 10101101 101 1010001 1011100111 0111 01111 101101110101 11111 0100010 101011110 011101 0111111 1010110 111010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 798 |
Words | 171 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 25 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 625 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 161 |
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Written on November 11, 2021
Submitted by 33sykes33 on December 04, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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