Analysis of Struggle to fame.



The mind focused on fame so long
grasping at hands of the gifted followers
they climbed with smile after gracious smile,
rubbing their stardust cells
into your hands like a game of tree house.
As one falls another rises still to the canopy of life's camera lens,
again and again they
rise and fall.
Their viewers eyes tiring and aged
pushing doors open for you
once more, clutching to a once
heart pounding love unforgotten.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKL
Poetic Form
Metre 01101111 10111010100 111110101 10111 0111101111 11101010110100111001 010011 101 11011001 1011011 1110101 11011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 427
Words 82
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 343
Words per stanza (avg) 75

About this poem

God views you like stars in his skies, as close as a pin prick yet as far as the galaxy it yelps into.

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Written on December 05, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on December 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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