Analysis of Shawty was a mess

Stephen jnr Zaba 2004 (Bindura)



Shawty was a mess

Impressive lifestyle , party girl my girlfriend was a money sucker
Every boy she dated it ended in a bankruptcy this made her smarter
Cute eyes she built my trust
Fake lies couldn't be faker
She got real and realer when she made mom believe
Introduced her to my family with delight but look I'm broken
Fairytale true love stories she made me believe
When she looked me in my eyes I couldn't believe...what I was seeing was beautiful indeed
She gave me that feeling as if she has the power to take me to heaven and back
Later I understood it was hell and flames
So shawty you still rule you are at the realm
Dark truth about you came to me late
Five star cheater I rate
Married to demons you seem not to regret
I wish I never loved you rue I regret
So fake
That time you made me sip my alcohol
I had fallen in luv with one who knows single flow
I'm fade up
I have to move on I can't love no more
You are not real why trust you once more
I don't hate you I just don't want you no more
Goodbye


Scheme X AAXABXBXXXXCCDDXXXXEEEX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 010110111101010 10011101100010011010 111111 1110110 11101111101 0101110010111110 10111011101 111101111011110110001 111110111101011111001 1010111101 1111111101 110111111 111011 10110111101 11110111101 11 111111110 1110011111101 111 1111111111 111111111 11111111111 1
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,039
Words 226
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 23
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 397
Words per stanza (avg) 103

About this poem

In his love relationship were he thought she was the true and real one ...it turned out the girl was just the biggest player he ever dated @dedication to shawty

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Written on December 24, 2021

Submitted by Loner on December 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Stephen jnr Zaba

Stephen jnr Zaba also known as Lone Walker is a poet whose poetry was inspired by lyrical content from the late rapper juice wrld .He started writing at the age of 13 , in his first year at high school.His poetry is more on depression, anxiety, broken hearts,politics and general events of life .On YouTube his work is found on xaba wrld poems. more…

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