Analysis of A Very Gay and Adult Night Before Christmas
"Twas the night before Christmas
And all through the house
Every gay boy was partying,
There was no mouse.
The dancers were hung and paid to be there,
In hopes that a Daddy would treat them with care.
The twinks were all naked ready for bed,
While visions of Britney danced in their heads.
Hubbie in his jockstrap and me in my harness,
Had just poppered up with no plans to rest.
When out by the hot tub,
There arose such a clatter
I sprang from the sling to see what was the matter.
Away to the window, I flew like a flash,
Tore open the shutters and threw up the sash.
The disco lights on the new fallen snow
Gave the lustre of freshness to lube left below.
When what to my drunk horny eyes should appear,
But a miniature sleigh and "Pups" playing in mock fear.
With a big muscled driver, so Dom and Masc,
I knew in a moment that it was St. Nick's ass.
Hoping for spankings, his trained slave Pups came,
And he whistled, and shouted, and called them by name;
'Now, Asher, you dancer! Stop prancing now Vincent!
Get on Tony, don't be stupid. Smash with Chad, your cock will fix him.
To the tops, get on in there. To the tops, deep to balls.
Now cum away, cum away, cum away all!'
As dry leaves that before the wild hurricane fly,
those tight spit on asses were mounted 'neath the sky.
Then up to the house-top the fuckers they flew,
With the sleigh full of sex toys, and St. Nicholas too.
And then, in a twinkling, I heard on the roof
The jingling of chains 'round the neck of each Poof.
As I drew hand to cock and got more turned on,
Down my chimney St. Nick came with his own wet hard-on.
He was dressed all in leather, from his pecs to his thighs,
And his nipples were pierced with steel - oh my!
A bundle of dildos he had flung on his back,
And he leered like a pervert just opening his pack.
His pre-cum-how it glistened! His biceps so sturdy!
His ass cheeks were like biscuits, his nipples like cherries!
His droll little mouth could have licked me head to toe,
And the beard of his chin would have tickled my ass for sho';
The stump of a pipe he held tight in his teeth,
And the smoke, it encircled his crotch like a wreath;
He had a long thick dick and big giant balls,
That shook when he laughed and made my own dick stand tall.
He was ripped and tight, his abs hard as shelves.
And I moaned when I reached down and stroked myself;
A wink of his eye and a twist of his cock,
Soon gave me to know my world would be rocked;
He spoke not a word, but went straight to his work,
And filled up my asshole; then turned with a jerk,
And laying his finger on the last drop of cum,
leaving one last taste, up my chimney, my bum.
Slapping my ass, to his team gave a call,
And down they all flew to come lick our balls.
But I heard him exclaim, ere he left out of sight,
Horny Christmas To All, And To All A Good-night!"
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Metre | 1010110 01101 100111100 1111 0100101111 01101011111 0101101011 110111011 1011010110 111111111 111011 1011010 111011111010 01101011101 11001001101 0101101101 101011011101 11111101101 1010010110011 10110101101 110010111111 101111111 011001001111 110110110110 1110111011111111 1011101101111 11011011011 11110101101 111110010101 11101101011 1011111011001 010010011101 0111101111 11111101111 1110111111111 1111010111111 0110011111 01011111111 0111010110011 111111011110 1110110110110 111011111111 00111111101111 01101111011 001101011101 11011101101 111110111111 111011111111 0111111011 01111001111 1111111111 11101111111 01111011101 010110101111 10111111011 1011111101 01111111101 111101111111 101011011011 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 2,846 |
Words | 638 |
Sentences | 34 |
Stanzas | 28 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 59 |
Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 77 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 20 |
About this poem
This poem came about on a Saturday Morning as I texted with friends and was inspired by the challenge of an adult and gay Christmas poem.
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Written on December 18, 2021
Submitted by JaredKairel on December 25, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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