Analysis of That I Was Here



Every where I turn
The news is bad
I'm still alive
But I ain't glad.

The news they say
this summer so hot
I stay inside
and feel it not.

My old bones ere
always cold, that
the way it is
So I've been told.

My name is Joe,
What a dumb name
and have no money
and have no fame.

So when I'm gone
If I ever am for
Actually dying
I have no plan.

But I suppose I will
Kick the bucket some day
And if they read my rhyme
then they will know
That I came by this way.


Scheme XAXA BCXC XXXX DEXE XXXX XBXDB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (44%)
Metre 100111 0111 1101 1111 0111 11011 1101 0111 1111 111 0111 1111 1111 1011 01110 0111 1111 111011 10010 1111 110111 101011 011111 1111 111111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 466
Words 119
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

A poem I wrote in 2021 with the hope I will be remembered when I have returned to dust. Joe Hampton

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Written on October 23, 2021

Submitted by joemirlhampton on December 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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