Analysis of Giving up
Jessica Millitello 1988 (United States)
Waiting for the day to come to an end,
So I can finally escape my reality again.
I do my best to push through,
But it seems I'm failing that too.
Nothing really quite ever gets done,
And I am struggling to find a reason.
I sit here all day fighting my depression,
And prraying no one notices or questions,
My lack of desire or motivation to care,
Because really there isn't any there.
I have given up completely,
I'm like a ghost of what I used to be.
Jessica is gone along with every dream,
The bipolar has finally won it seems.
I'm just waiting for this body to give in,
And finally join the emptiness within.
I have always forced myself to be strong,
But somehow now it feels all wrong.
There is nothing strong about me,
And really there never was honestly.
Another day gone that I refused to fight,
Night is here and with it still no relief in sight.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1010111111 1111000111001 1111111 11111011 101011011 01110011010 11111101010 0111100110 111010101011 0110110101 11101010 1101111111 100110111001 00101100111 11101110110 01001010001 11111111 1111111 11101011 0101101100 01011110111 111011110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 855 |
Words | 185 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 22 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 665 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 164 |
About this poem
I wrote this when really sad
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Written on January 04, 2022
Submitted by 313FELON on January 10, 2022
Modified on April 02, 2023
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