Analysis of Mum: Missing Miss Mavis Freeman”
You fell asleep peacefully,
Can you hear me calling softly?
“Mommy, mommy.”
The calling of children.
You
will not answer again.
Time,
A freeze-frame in our photo,
In our memories.
Your love,
The same love from my parents,
Will be with me forever.
Mum,
I hate running water,
The flow is ruthless,
Time flows like water,
I can't catch the river of time.
I can't hear you.
You fell asleep so peacefully
| Scheme | AAAX BX CXXXXD XDXDC BA |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1101100 11111010 1010 010110 1 111001 1 0110101 010100 11 0111110 1111010 1 111010 01110 11110 11101011 1111 11011100 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 423 |
| Words | 94 |
| Sentences | 9 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 2, 6, 5, 2 |
| Lines Amount | 19 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 16 |
| Words per line (avg) | 4 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 61 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 14 |
About this poem
Missing my mum Miss Mavis Freeman
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Written on December 29, 2021
Submitted by matt_hu2002 on January 10, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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