Analysis of My Child



My Child
I hunger for the child in me –
That fair haired child with steps so quick,
Who fell asleep every year while waiting for St. Nick.
That laughing child with eyes so bright,
Who gathered lightning bugs on warm summer nights.
That cherub face child with manners so sweet,
Who laughed when Nanny put socks on the cat's feet.
That curious child with questions ever flowing,
Who always wanted to know what kept things growing.
That playful child with one skinned knee,
Who insisted Granddaddy join her for an afternoon tea.
That bashful child with a pony tail braid,
Who had five boyfriends in the first grade.
That quiet child in a favorite pink blouse,
Who built a world of her own inside a doll’s house.
That fearless child known for taking dares,
Who knelt down each night to say her prayers.
I hunger for the child in me as I watch my life years roll by,
I'd like to catch a glimpse of her once more before I die.
Today I looked into life's mirror to see what I could see,
A familiar stranger was staring back it was the child in me.


Scheme ABCCDEFFGGBBHHIIJJKKBB
Poetic Form
Metre 11 11010101 11111111 11011001110111 11011111 11010111101 1101111011 11110111011 110011101010 11101111110 11011111 1010101011011 110110111 11110011 11010010011 110110101011 110111101 111111101 1101010111111111 11110110110111 011101110111111 0010101101110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,055
Words 216
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 819
Words per stanza (avg) 196

About this poem

Not being able to have children of my own, I write about childhood and the wonders of it all.

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Written on October 14, 1988

Submitted on January 14, 2022

Modified on April 17, 2023

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Janet Marie Melton Sharp

I was raised in Hendersonville, North Carolina and graduated from University of North Carolina-Asheville with a Bachelor of Science degree in Business Administration with distinction in Accounting and Computer Science. I have spent the last twenty years as Senior Staff Accountant for a non-profit foundation. I make my home in Asheville, NC with my husband of 36 years, Dale and our two Tonkinese kitty boys – Oliver and Andy. “I use my college education to make a living but I use my artistic abilities to make a life.” more…

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