Analysis of My Child
My Child
I hunger for the child in me –
That fair haired child with steps so quick,
Who fell asleep every year while waiting for St. Nick.
That laughing child with eyes so bright,
Who gathered lightning bugs on warm summer nights.
That cherub face child with manners so sweet,
Who laughed when Nanny put socks on the cat's feet.
That curious child with questions ever flowing,
Who always wanted to know what kept things growing.
That playful child with one skinned knee,
Who insisted Granddaddy join her for an afternoon tea.
That bashful child with a pony tail braid,
Who had five boyfriends in the first grade.
That quiet child in a favorite pink blouse,
Who built a world of her own inside a doll’s house.
That fearless child known for taking dares,
Who knelt down each night to say her prayers.
I hunger for the child in me as I watch my life years roll by,
I'd like to catch a glimpse of her once more before I die.
Today I looked into life's mirror to see what I could see,
A familiar stranger was staring back it was the child in me.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11 11010101 11111111 11011001110111 11011111 11010111101 1101111011 11110111011 110011101010 11101111110 11011111 1010101011011 110110111 11110011 11010010011 110110101011 110111101 111111101 1101010111111111 11110110110111 011101110111111 0010101101110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,055 |
Words | 216 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 22 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 819 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 196 |
About this poem
Not being able to have children of my own, I write about childhood and the wonders of it all.
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Written on October 14, 1988
Submitted on January 14, 2022
Modified on April 17, 2023
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