Analysis of Serena flor de meus bons caminhos

Renato Sakate 1978 (Botucatu)



Oh, serena flor de meus bons caminhos
és tácita rocha em cálidas águas,
és doce fascínio e incólumes mágoas.
És dentre as camélias, orquídeas, lírios!

Rever-te é emergir de virtuosas fábulas
é ter entre o cinza e o nada, um arco-íris,
é prantear contente e sorrir colírios.
Viver-te é expirar num mundo sem máculas!

Tu foste escolhida dentre milhares
e destas milhares sempre serás
hoje, a beleza ímpar num mar de pares.

Portanto, serena flor, ademais
terás o desfrute de outras passagens
e verás... És fruto do que há demais!


Scheme AAAA AAAA AAA AAA
Poetic Form
Metre 101011111 111101111 111111111 1111111110 1111111 1101111101101 1111110 111110111 11111 111111 10111111 101011 1111111 111111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 555
Words 100
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on 2003

Submitted by on January 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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