Analysis of Couple on a boat
Jessica Wiederhold 1989 (Flint)
Couple on a Boat
Written by: Jessica Wiederhold
Inspired by: Sergey Sergeevich Solomko
Clouds of darkness, obliterating the day lights richest diamond merely the sun,
Galaxies, of dazzling night sky’s, undesirable pleasures, the sun formed settling beyond the shadows over the river.
Wooden ore’s stratal the sides of the lightly weighed wooden boat, two lovers set on a voyage to their newly founded futures, of love and adequate structures of their newly desired founding’s.
Kisses of greatness, now a day later with vivid beauty in her dreams, what a grand departure in his perception of this night of his pure devotedly structed adulation.
Fogs are common on the coast, until morning dawned I was tossed on a buoyant yet unquiet river’s billow of troubles surged an under joyed.
There in distance there sits the nightmare of his forgotten love, grotesque and wide, yet seemingly pulchritudinous.
Regretting his visual liaison, upon his past desires, forecasting her next ritual, of vulgarest and barbaric intentions, to put a curse on a love that only gave life its most greatest prudent of all intentions, his demonic difficulties enforcing herself to come to terms, with the horrible man who’d been the bane of her horrifying mindless unrighteous of all cause’s, of all his fading newly intentions, with this newly founded love, on this dark river, on an old, ole wooden boat.
Scheme | A X X B X C B A C A |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10101 101100100 01011011 1110010001110101001 100110011010010011100010110010 1011011010110111011010111010101101001011100101 1011010110110100011010100101011111111010 111010101101111101011101011011101 10101101110101010111001 010110001011101010011001100100101101101110111110101101010101000010011111101001110110100101111011110100101110101111101111101 |
Characters | 1,416 |
Words | 246 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 10 |
Letters per line (avg) | 112 |
Words per line (avg) | 23 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 112 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
About this poem
Inspired by artist: Sergey Sergeevich Solomko
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Written on December 12, 2021
Submitted by Garykortassgirl on January 06, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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