Analysis of Couple on a boat

Jessica Wiederhold 1989 (Flint)



Couple on a Boat

Written by: Jessica Wiederhold

Inspired by: Sergey Sergeevich Solomko

Clouds of darkness, obliterating the day lights richest diamond merely the sun,

Galaxies, of dazzling night sky’s, undesirable pleasures, the sun formed settling beyond the shadows over the river.

Wooden ore’s stratal the sides of the lightly weighed wooden boat, two lovers set on a voyage to their newly founded futures, of love and adequate structures of their newly desired founding’s.

Kisses of greatness, now a day later with vivid beauty in her dreams, what a grand departure in his perception of this night of his pure devotedly structed adulation.

Fogs are common on the coast, until morning dawned I was tossed on a buoyant yet unquiet river’s billow of troubles surged an under joyed.

There in distance there sits the nightmare of his forgotten love, grotesque and wide, yet seemingly pulchritudinous.

Regretting his visual liaison, upon his past desires, forecasting her next ritual, of vulgarest and barbaric intentions, to put a curse on a love that only gave life its most greatest prudent of all intentions,  his demonic difficulties enforcing herself to come to terms, with the horrible man who’d been the bane of her horrifying mindless unrighteous of all cause’s, of all his fading newly intentions, with this newly founded love, on this dark river, on an old, ole wooden boat.


Scheme A X X B X C B A C A
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 101100100 01011011 1110010001110101001 100110011010010011100010110010 1011011010110111011010111010101101001011100101 1011010110110100011010100101011111111010 111010101101111101011101011011101 10101101110101010111001 010110001011101010011001100100101101101110111110101101010101000010011111101001110110100101111011110100101110101111101111101
Characters 1,416
Words 246
Sentences 6
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 112
Words per line (avg) 23
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

Inspired by artist: Sergey Sergeevich Solomko

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Written on December 12, 2021

Submitted by Garykortassgirl on January 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:13 min read
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Jessica Wiederhold

Just a lost girl,, in a big world.. I have the greatest dreams, dreams I'd never dreamed of pushing for until today, so it is today I will express and endure my greatest talents for others to enjoy. Born on, June 29th, 1989. Born in the city and state of Flint, Michigan, too Jessica and Steven Wiederhold. My name is Jessica Lyn Wiederhold, 6lbs 10oz, I am a mother to three wonderful boys, they to have helped me, walk towards my biggest goals, and brightest endeavors of my future. "Never let the fears of striking out keep you from playing the game". Hillary Duff. more…

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