Analysis of the need to survive



I look ahead and see
A path that wants us dead
I know i can not fail
For if i do
My world will suffer

I must find a way
A way we can survive
Not just for me
But for him
I can not let him be taken

This path disrupts our bond
But that will not stop me
Our bond is strong
Stronger than any obstacle
And that’s why i can’t fail

I must survive
To protect him
To teach him
To see him grow
I must not give up


Scheme AXBXX XCADX XAXXB CDDXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 110101 011111 111111 1111 11110 11101 011101 1111 111 11111110 1101101 111111 10111 10110100 011111 1101 1011 111 1111 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 412
Words 98
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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about a man and why he needs to survive

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Written on January 05, 2022

Submitted by rs.hall829 on January 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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