Analysis of Unloving humble ..



Sometimes it's so unbreakable Hard
To become a bit we used to be
 No matter how dense it can be Without I am so incomplete
I am trying but how to let the other person know
The path is soaking me to bring the worst in me
 Just to survive without the loving for other being
 Can I be alive ! If You do not be after me


Scheme ABCDBEB
Poetic Form
Metre 011101001 101011111 1101111101111001 11101111010101 011101110101 11010101011010 1110111111101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 319
Words 71
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 243
Words per stanza (avg) 68

About this poem

It's a story about my life where I am struggling with choosing love for other being instead taking a proper stand for me and a journey to be hopelessly kind to break the society norms of hurting each other to survive

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Submitted by jasleen_b on January 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jasleen Kaur Babbar

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