Analysis of behind my smile

Jazmin 1951



Look into my eyes,
 would you notice a person hurting … A soul that's fighting to survive

what do you hope to see...
 May be a person that is happy, smiling constantly,
 Keep looking in my eyes,
 you will have a firsthand view, of feelings that are so unpleasant .

Pain that is also true
 I ask for no sympathy,
 see me as the same person
 Don't treat me differently.


Scheme AX BBAX XBXB
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 11100101001110101 111111 11010111010100 110011 1110011110111010 111101 1111100 1110110 111100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 381
Words 80
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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to a friend who is mad about my smile

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Written on February 24, 2022

Submitted by Jazmin on February 25, 2022

Modified on April 14, 2023

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