Analysis of Strings

Jonathan P Oliver 1969 (United States)



Heart strings being pulled
Strings can snag and fray
They can keep a kite aloft
To float on a beautiful day

Strings played, gently strummed
Making sweet pleasant sounds
Strings to pull as children smile
While marionettes dance 'round

String tied to the finger
Of an absent minded soul
I need no reminding
Your heart was always my goal

A string drawn by cupid
His eye trained on you
Tiny arrow flies fast
You sweet smile and eyes of blue

Strings can tie or bind
Hold strong, safe, and true
Our knot is unbreakable
I was always meant for you


Scheme ABXB AXXX XCXC XDXD XDXD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (40%)
Metre 11101 11101 1110101 11101001 11101 101101 1111101 1111 111010 1110101 111010 111111 011110 11111 101011 1110111 11111 11101 10110100 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 545
Words 106
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

Got back with my first real love. 30+ years later. Traumas, children, marriages, years, mental illnesses.....

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Written on January 22, 2022

Submitted by joliver02269 on February 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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