Analysis of My last request

Rabelani Ndou Robson 2007 (Johannesburg)



Did you have to be in the past                    If you held on to our love it could have last I lost my grip on you and I ain't proud now a day's I think aloud when I'm not around you. But either ways I wouldn't be in peace but that didn't mean you had to break me in piece I guess I can't get you back but I miss you and my last request is one last kiss


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Characters 356
Words 78
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 253
Words per line (avg) 97
Letters per stanza (avg) 253
Words per stanza (avg) 97

About this poem

It's about trying to get a love back, and if she doesn't agree it asks for a last request

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Written on February 21, 2022

Submitted by rabelanindou67 on March 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rabelani Ndou Robson

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