Analysis of Someone

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



She lit a candle
Brighter than the sun
The candle was the heart;
At the heart of someone.
She held it to the curtain
And fire grew around
in rages and swirls;
in burns they found.
Why did she stay?
I do not know.
How did she bare its
surrounding glow?
For a minute
she breathed,
breathed in the sun.
And only then,
she knew what she'd done.


Scheme ABCBBDEDFGHGIJBKB
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 10101 010101 10111 1111010 010101 01001 0111 1111 1111 11111 0101 1010 11 1001 0101 11111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 341
Words 79
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 261
Words per stanza (avg) 68
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Written on March 11, 2022

Submitted by heathert.34240 on March 11, 2022

Modified on March 22, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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