Analysis of Park Pathway



The urge and the afternoon sun,
Set the mind racing to the Park.
New faces, children in prams,
Others without music facing
new uncertain steps
and flying hands.

I walked on new paths.
Never before walked on the grass.
So sadly running away
from the sounds of human breath.
Random paths, no patterns,
But not by design but by
an unbearable fear.

Feeling the wind, catching rays,
Faintly hearing laughs,
And children screams.
Brought hope and plenty of joy
Matching soft distance music by the trees.


Scheme XXAXAA AAXXAXX AAAXA
Poetic Form
Metre 0100011 10110101 1101001 10011010 10101 0101 11111 10011101 1101001 1011101 101110 1110111 101001 1001101 10101 0101 1101011 1011010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 532
Words 106
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 5
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 132
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

Life may offer simple things and most of the joy to feel and understand what behind what sound complex and beyond reach Few moments can show you different Pathways to take and move in different direction for different life and experiences. Make your step and see beyond your eyes and limited vision

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Written on March 18, 2022

Submitted by Poetry@80 on March 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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