Analysis of Saying Thank You



When you come into the land,
That your Lord God is giving;
An inheritance to stand,
A residence for living.

You shall take some of the first,
Of all the fruit from the ground;
And the Lord will quench your thirst,
When praising a pleasant sound.

You shall go unto the priest,
And declare unto the Lord;
While preparing a feast,
Showing that He is adored,

The priest shall take your first fruit,
And set it on the altar;
Honoring to attribute,
Praising Him, not to falter.

Make response before the Lord,
When you came to the nation;
You transformed as one accord,
To be a new creation.

Evil afflicted so much,
Treated harshly in bondage;
You had cried out for His touch,
As they try to discourage.

Cry to God of your father,
For the Lord will hear your voice;
Seeing what has gone further,
His rescue makes you rejoice.

The Lord God has brought you here,
With His mighty outstretched arm;
From the deeds that had brought fear,
With the wonders of His charm.

He had brought us to this place.
Flowing with milk and honey;
Gave us this land with His grace,
For living in harmony.

Bring the first fruit of the ground,
Which was given by the Lord;
Praise Him with a joyous sound,
For He is loved and adored.

Copyright ©2022 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH FIFI JKJK HLHL XMXM NONO DFDF H
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 1111110 1010011 0100110 1111101 1101101 0011111 1100101 1111001 0011001 101001 1011101 0111111 0111010 100110 1011110 1010101 1111010 1011101 1101010 1001011 1010010 1111111 1111010 1111110 1011111 1011110 1101101 0111111 1110011 1011111 1010111 1111111 1011010 1111111 1100100 1011101 1110101 1110101 1111001 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,251
Words 279
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Offerings of Firstfruits and Tithes Deuteronomy 26:1-10

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Written on March 24, 2022

Submitted by richards.77936 on March 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:23 min read
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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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