Analysis of The Muse and the Whim



Within the safe, strong walls of the chest
Happens a prying prick, a constant nag

Like from the sword of an amateur fencer
This crude and dull, flashes of insight

Fancy a word here and a thought there
But the mind fights for a certain array

The journeyman that is within comes calling
The blade's hilt is tightly clasped from falling

Back and forth, the notorious wit does circus
This game of steel, takes no cue from precursor

Wide, the doors that open troves of sketches
A swordsman ought to treasure his focus

As calmness cloaks the drumbeats retreating
A shade of poise, paints this dancing.


Scheme XX AX AA BB CA XC BB
Poetic Form
Metre 010111101 1001010101 110111101 11011011 100110011 1011101001 0101101110 0111101110 101001001110 11111111010 1011101110 011110110 110101010 01111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 601
Words 112
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

The verses were realized on a rather sultry afternoon under gleaming office lights.

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Written on March 24, 2022

Submitted by jimbssaabraham on March 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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