Analysis of When our eyes meet.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



My eyes are yours
Your eyes are mine
I look into your eyes
I walk into your arms
You look into my eyes
Such is a whisper to my soul
As one our eyes meet
Our lips meet
Eyes open and close
Close together we are one
The only one
No other surrounds us
No words profound us
Only the ocean engulfs our thoughts
As we are brought
Together
When our eyes meet


Scheme ABCDCEFFGHHIIJKLF
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1111 110111 110111 110111 11010111 111011 1011 11001 1010111 0101 110011 11011 100101101 1111 010 11011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 351
Words 74
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 278
Words per stanza (avg) 73
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Written on April 01, 2022

Submitted by heathert.34240 on April 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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