Analysis of When I'm with you.
Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)
When I'm with you I want to live
For all that I am is all that you give
My heart feels full when I look at you
I skip when I walk to keep up with you
When I'm with you I keep in the pain
For to break you down would have nothing to gain
My garden blooms when you are near
I am so lucky to have you here.
When I'm with you I hold back tears
for nothing can break you - you have no fears.
My world ends with you so when we are gone I know that you'd be the only one.
| Scheme | XXAA BBXX XXX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11111111 1111111111 111111111 1111111111 111111001 11111111011 11011111 111101111 11111111 1101111111 1111111111111110101 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 466 |
| Words | 112 |
| Sentences | 3 |
| Stanzas | 3 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 3 |
| Lines Amount | 11 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
| Words per line (avg) | 10 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 116 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 36 |
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Written on April 02, 2022
Submitted by heathert.34240 on April 02, 2022
Modified by heathert.34240 on April 02, 2022
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