Analysis of Mi Cuerpo (Restos Mortales)

Jorge Luis Diaz Granados Lugo 1990 (Santa Marta)

Lyric
A media noche,
El corazón teme en agonía...
Sufre en su silencio, con sus latidos,
que se apagan muy lentamente.

Muere en su espesa tristeza, roja como la sangre,
fluyendo aire, fluyendo la nada, fluyendo...
el supuesto amor.

Oh pobre corazón, nunca conocisteis
lo que te deparaba el amor, ahora envejeces,
pierdes funcionalidad, vitalidad. Como el pétalo
de una rosa, te marchitas, te mueres.

Y como si de un solo movimiento,
un último aire o suspiro que se quebranta.
Me llevas contigo para hacerte compañía…
Me arrastras a tus ilógicas decisiones,
a tus indescifrables motivos,
a tus acciones dementes,
que juntos...
Compartiremos el mismo ataúd.

¡ Si !

Mi cuerpo (Restos mortales)

Scheme XABC DCD BBXB CCABBBBC B B
Poetic Form
Metre 01001 1111110 1111111 11111 1111111011 1111101 1110 111111 111111011 11110111 110101111 11011111 11111111 11110110 1101111 0111 0111 11 111101 1 1111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 706
Words 133
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 8, 1, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

Poem published in 2019 by the author Jorge Luis Diaz Granados Lugo, belonging to the book Mirada De Diamante.

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Written on November 27, 2019

Submitted by stephanieharris on April 02, 2022

Modified by stephanieharris on April 02, 2022

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Jorge Luis Diaz Granados Lugo

Jorge Luis Diaz Granados Lugo, better known as J.L. Diazgranados is a Colombian writer, poet, artist, voice actor, video game developer, musician and composer. He was born in Santa Marta, Colombia. In his childhood he showed interest in writing as a curious, troubled, restless and imaginative child. He began writing and reciting poems for special or commemorative events at the Liceo Celedón school where he graduated as a bachelor. At the end of 2010 he began to write more focused poems as a literary genre. He graduated as a Technologist in video game development at Sena, excelling in several arts. He took first place at Tecnobot 2012 developing a video game in three days. For 2014 he participated as a voice actor playing the antagonist of the story "The Man with White Gloves" in the short film Control Z. By 2022 he began his career as a musician and composer publishing his first works. more…

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