Analysis of One Sudden Summer’s Evening: Ballad



It began on a sudden summer's evening:
I was the funniest kid around,
He was the best big brother
Until it all sunk into the ground

He was my role model,
The best big brother he could be,
Parents weren’t around much
So it was just him and me.

We used to giggle so well together,
Back then.
We wanted to travel around the world,
Even though I was just 10

But one evening, one sudden evening,
We had too much fun.
Together we decided to run away,
We thought the fun we had, wasn’t done

From that moment on, our lives had changed.

And then it happened:

Oh no! Oh no!

We got caught!
My brother in the driver's seat
But oh, he fought

Seeing the life leave my brother
I scream in sorrow
Reality kicked in
That my brother won’t be here tomorrow

The next day I thought my heart had broken,
I thought my eyes had burst into flames,
I was alone

But still, he is in my thoughts.
I think about how it all changed that evening,
That sudden summer's evening.

My heart... ouch!
When I think of the best big brother
My big brother and me
 


Scheme ABCB XDXD CXXX AEXE X X F XXX CFXF EXX XAA XCD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (37%)
Metre 10110101010 110100101 1101110 011110101 111110 01110111 101011 1111101 1111011010 11 1101100101 101111 111011010 11111 0101101101 11011111 1110110111 01110 1111 111 11000101 1111 10011110 11010 1010 111011101 0111111110 111111011 1101 1111011 11011111110 1101010 111 111101110 111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,053
Words 235
Sentences 12
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1, 1, 1, 3, 4, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

About the relationship between a young boy and his older brother. Until one sudden Summer's evening, he dies due to police violence.

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Written on March 13, 2022

Submitted by sjourney701 on March 13, 2022

Modified on March 27, 2023

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