Analysis of Where are your shoes?

Jonathan Slaton 1954 (United States)



Where did your shoes go?  Where could they be?
Are they under the bed or up in a tree?
How could your shoes have wandered so far?
To the back of the couch or inside the car?
Sometimes they scatter like kittens, I know,
One next to the sink and one under the snow.
Oh!  Look here, I found them, they’re inside this box
Now wait just a minute, so where are your socks?


Scheme AABBCCDD
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111 11100111001 111111011 10110110101 0111011011 11101011001 11111110111 11101011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 368
Words 80
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 277
Words per stanza (avg) 76

About this poem

Written one evening after taking care of my twin granddaughters (age 18 months) The shoe locations are only slightly exaggerated.

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Written on October 12, 2021

Submitted by jchslaton on March 20, 2022

Modified on May 01, 2023

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Jonathan Slaton

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