Analysis of Unfortune dismay
Idk if I am doing fine until I see the dawn
lose tender legs, weak arms
are not being part of me anymore
My legs are freaking out
the blotted stomach is not letting me dine
And yet making me sick.
I am high on temperature more than my temper
Dizziness is all around my head
Those moments of twitching carves makes it harder to tolerate
However, these 5 days can't take my charisma away. But Idk if I'll do fine until.
| Scheme | XXXXXX XXXX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) Etheree (20%) |
| Metre | 1111101011101 110111 111011101 111101 01010111011 011011 111110011110 100110111 11011011110110 10111110100111111101 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 420 |
| Words | 86 |
| Sentences | 3 |
| Stanzas | 2 |
| Stanza Lengths | 6, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 10 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
| Words per line (avg) | 8 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 165 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 41 |
About this poem
I'm 22 and have started struggling hard with secondary periods of pain. It is tough for me to bear momentary cramps and all day long tender legs. Meanwhile, to distract myself, I took my diary out and yet wrote about the same suffering.
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Written on April 13, 2022
Submitted by ragnilamba18 on April 14, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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