Analysis of Waiting at the Door

Aiden-Micheal James Murray 2009 (Huntington, Indiana)



I was just a pup when we first met,
You loved me from the start,
You picked me up and took me home and placed me in your heart.
Good times we had together,
We shared all life could throw,
But years passed all too quickly,
My time has come to go.
I know how much you miss me,
I know your heart is sore,
I see the tears fall when I’m not waiting at the door.
You always did your best for me,
Your love was plain to see,
For even though it broke your heart, you set my spirit free.
So please be brave without me,
One day we’ll meet once more,
For when Mr. Grim comes to make your leaves fall.
Don’t take long for,
I’ll be waiting at the door.


Scheme ABBCDEDEFFEEEEFGFF
Poetic Form
Metre 111011111 111101 11110111011011 1111010 111111 1111110 111111 1111111 111111 1101111110101 1111111 111111 11011111111101 1111011 111111 11101111111 1111 1110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 648
Words 151
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 482
Words per stanza (avg) 134

About this poem

This is a poem about my dog that died from cancer and it is written from his perspective, I made this for an assignment in 7th grade.

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Written on March 27, 2022

Submitted by aidenmurray392 on April 14, 2022

Modified by aidenmurray392 on April 14, 2022

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