Analysis of This poem is for someone I am still waiting for that person to apologise and explain what went wrong

RS 1981 (India)



I was young ,full of dreams .
I was such a fool, who lost myself.
 I saw u smile and nothing ever was same again.
Sparkle in your eyes, took away my sleep.
Oh those mischievous eyes, I still can't forget.
A glimpse of you, and my heartbeats soared.
I just wished to hide, when you looked at me.
how u caught my arm , when I fell.
Many times I  cried and you made me smile.
But then you changed,
U hurt me
again and again.
Didn't let me speak
U made me cry ,
On the slightest chance .
U pushed & shoved me
again and again.
I got sad,.
Rest of school,
 I turned silent.
U never said sorry .
Never explained.

This poem is for someone I wish that person reads and completes it.


Scheme xxaxxxbxxxbAxxxbAxxxbx x
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11101111 1111010101101 1001110111 11100111101 01110111 1111111111 11111111 1011101111 1111 111 01001 10111 1111 10101 1111 01001 111 111 1110 110110 1001 1101111111010011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 677
Words 154
Sentences 18
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 22, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 251
Words per stanza (avg) 70
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