Analysis of I want this pain to scar deep



Loving you will definitely leave some scars,
but it's definitely a pain I'm willing to endure.


Scheme AB
Poetic Form
Metre 10111000111 11100001110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 96
Words 17
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 2
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

I am trying to communicate that I know she may break my heart, but I still want to be with her. I can't live without her. It's quite short, and not entirely profound, though I believe there is potential here. Please leave a comment if you have an idea or thought. Have a terrific evening...

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Written on March 09, 2022

Submitted by aprivera1432 on May 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Antonius

I am a young, amateur writer wishing to get better at writing poetry, or just writing in general. So by all means dear friends, please critique my work, I am more than willing to receive help from anyone. Share your thoughts and ideas with me. Have a lovely day... more…

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