Analysis of The Blame

Jeremy Beacham 1979 (Tesax)



I thought I was the one you wanted to hold
But you said it was too many lies that were told
I guess that's why your heart went astray
And why you pushed me away.
I'll take that blame.

Eight months went by and we haven't felt each others touch
But I loved you so much.
All I wanted to do is work so you and I can live.
But what I was doing wasn't enough to give
The blame is on me

All I wanted was to fill your cup
Never meant to enrage you and have you blow up
But the truth came out
And I'm the walking around with shame and doubt
But I'll be a man and take that blame.


Scheme AABBC DDXXX EEFFC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11110111011 111111101101 111111101 0111101 1111 1111011011101 111111 11101111110111 111110100111 01111 111011111 101101101111 10111 01010011101 111010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 573
Words 131
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 145
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted by jeremy_b on April 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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