Analysis of "With Friends”



In the sunset we come together,
To become best friends forever.
We hang at the big bungee bungalow,
Under the trees, with a woe.
Staring in each eye, looking toward the sky,
Where we lay, imagining to fly,
And talk as if we’re saying goodbye.
We come again and again as we grow
In the sunset.
Laughing together in nice weather
And coming together whenever.
And talking so confident, like we all know
To the bungalows is where we go.
Coming together forever,
In the sunset.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 00111010 10111010 111011010 1001101 10011100101 111010011 01110101 1101001111 001 100100110 010010010 01011001111 10101111 10010010 001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 475
Words 97
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 370
Words per stanza (avg) 86

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When you're with friends.

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Written on April 26, 2022

Submitted by JLerner on May 11, 2022

Modified by JLerner on May 12, 2022

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