Analysis of Invisible Cliffs



Invisible Cliffs
Calling all boosters, cheer on the long marchers, the invisible cliff looms high overhead
Evolving all the way, throwing out everything that weighs a body down, mobility is key
Originally part of the invisible pyramid, functional, helpful, nourishing the entire world

Previous exposures now no defense against future engagements, doors left wide open
This is just one piece of the juttingly higher hierarchy that we swim through everyday
Symptomless, painless, a walk in the park, five percent long termed after every wave

Life in the dirt walks like we walk in our airs, or swim like the fishes, home in the water
The goal is simple, slow down the human race, mission accomplished all too easily
This cliff has been building from an internal volcano of never ending life, as is all life

Everything we do is based on random happenings, reduces the cost of being prepared
The cliff is flat, yet it extends way below our feet, digging deeper and deeper every day
Remains constant as the oceans, the tides rise and fall as all clockwork motions do

Never goes away, recedes from consciousness, thriving on abandonment, always returns
That cliff doesn't stretch to infinity, every day the drop off is only a few steps away
Reds, blues, arguing face to face, symbolically marching arm in arm, falling down together


Scheme XXAX XBX CAX XBX XBC
Poetic Form
Metre 01001 1011011011000100111101 01010110110110101010011 0100011001001001001010000101 1000101101011001011110 11111101101001111101 1100100110111101001 10011111010111101010010 011101101011001011100 111110110100101101011111 1011111101000100111001 0111110110110110100101001 0110101001101111101 101010111001010100101 1110110100100101111001101 111001110100010101101010
Characters 1,330
Words 228
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 67
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 215
Words per stanza (avg) 45

About this poem

There are cliffs level with the ground that take life to the highest points and then let everything just fall down.

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Written on May 15, 2022

Submitted by rzwilling on May 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:08 min read
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Robert Zwilling

Robert Zwilling is digital artist and environmental poet who uses verbal brush strokes to illustrate life in the Natural World using jazz style text and pictures. more…

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