Analysis of wait for me



i fall bleak
as i turn around
and forget what i know
wait for me

im on my own
i know not what i should
nor where i should go
i know only the eternal inferno of my fate
so wait for me

guide me as you please
like you will do to her
with her unadorned mind
and her effortless intimacy
wait for me

wait for me
to be like her
replace me if my efforts become slow
and my heart abates
though unlikely

so
wait for me.


Scheme xxaB xxaxb xcxbB Bcaxb aB
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11101 001111 111 1111 111111 11111 11100010010111 1111 11111 111110 10011 001001000 111 111 1110 111110011 01101 1010 1 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 415
Words 95
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 5, 5, 2
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

about a boy i can’t help but love, and who once loved me (and might still do) we don’t talk but i want him to wait for me. i want him to not love anyone until we can love eachother

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Written on May 21, 2022

Submitted by eleanor.peshkin on May 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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