Analysis of Apple of my eye



The glistening lid peeled open the eye
A glittery dew brought prayers to a sigh
The sight of the footsteps of beings in soul
From tiniest creature to deity whole
As sun spun the light microscopic its aim
To live as a spark free to flare once again
To flare through each solar pathway of ecstatic light on garments unseen but for privileged sight onto dresses of diamond in crystal clear flight growing still then
reflecting its love at first sight on each spinning door
As the dress of a wedding ring fell on festival a floor. Blessing the consummation of life from birth to newlywed into new life.


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Poetic Form
Metre 0100111001 0100111101 0110111001 11001011001 1110101011 11101111101 11111011010111001111011010110010111011 0101111111101 10110101111000110001011111100111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 600
Words 111
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 54
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 488
Words per stanza (avg) 109

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To the deity of love

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Written on June 08, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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